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Whoa, I honestly did not expect to get three reviews in one day. Aside from that, thank you Dreamy115, I totally understand what you mean with the big words and ...

Well thank you Esme! I'll change it soon so it's more aesthetically pleasing instead of repitive. And thank you for pointing out that I was telling it rather than showing ...

Thank you, Karma!! I noticed that today when I was re-reading it and I totally freaked out. But thank you for pointing that out!! It's weird that nobody else noticed ...

Oh, thank you jackle and AllieTheWriter!! I'll work on the wording and did you really think they were puppets?? Maybe I didn't describe them well enough....hmmm...

@ EmiAnne, yes, this is only part one of a five, as in, i have four other parts that I'm still writing. And about the names, I'm going to tell ...

Oh, thank you, Quetseli!! Yeah, I did tend to repeat the whole limping thing a lot and I'll try to fix it so it's not so repetitive. Thank you for ...

Okay, I admit that you did a better job with this edit. It was great that you fixed the beginning part when they're in the house. I like that you ...

Wow, you're fast Quetseli! And thank you for the review! I'll be posting the next chapter up tomorrow, but it's not as edited as the first two chapters were, if ...

Thanks guys for reviewing! This actually is the novel I've already finished two books on. I'm currently writing the third. @Quetseli, I started laughing when I read your review because ...

Yes, it completely makes sense now. And you're welcome, if you want me to review anything else for you I will, just ask me. And also, when it's the middle ...

Thank you, Stella! I'll work on the tense because I also noticed that, I was just way to lazy to do anything about it. Thank you for your comments! I ...

Wow. Thank you both. :D The whole point of the poem is to keep repeating the "I am" part. I forgot the name of the format, but it's supposed to ...